Michael1011
Kava Curious
I’m not going to go over the plot now but one scene, three men on another earth like planet find forests of kava shrubs surrounding various sized bodies of water. Later they discover that these large bodies of water are natural brews of kava. Due to the heavy rain and ever expanding sizes they overtake the shrubs and over time the roots erode, leaving a natural reservoir of kava. There are even creatures living in these reservoirs who have adapted to being drenched in lactones. These fish and octopuses have no sight and rely on touch senses alone because nothing could see through kava. Anyway the rest of the plot involves them exploring a super earth, it’s not actually about kava, just this scene. Any ideas? How could I make this scene more interesting?